Monday, 30 December 2013

Nirbhaya/ "निर्भया"

Penned by Me...not just bcz Everybody wrote.. just bcz Culture of the Most Cultured Country was Raped..!
This was written a year ago...

Fir wahi mausam hai aur wahi insaan hai..
Lekin Ab Mahaul bada sanjida hai...
Giraftaaron ko kya saza milegi iska toh pata nahi..
Lekin Ek aur ladki hawas ke suli pe chadh gayi...
Logon me aakrosh achanak kaise aise futa..
Us raat Delhi ki sardi thi ya koi tara tha tuta..
Us haadse ke baad yun din guzar gaye..
Janta shor macahti rah gayi aur
Desh Ke Karndhaar Bahas karte rah gaye..
Kanoon ka muh fir se kala hua hai..
Kitne deshdrohion ko kabse paal raha hai...
Satyamev Jayate ka jahan bolbana hona tha..
Wahan ab Naukarshaahon ka gusalkhaana hai...
Roz be-abru ho raha hai ye smaaj..
Lekin insaan toh dhaak ke 3 paat wali usool pe chal rahe aaj..!


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6 comments:

  1. सार्थक सृजन !!
    भावप्रधान और एक दम सटीक !

    आज सहित्य पर भी बड़ा प्रशन है जब ये सब इतना काला अध्याय लिख रहा भारत के नव इतिहास में तो रंग स्याही का सिर्फ हरा रहे । हरा रंग (श्रृंगार भाव प्रसुती का) या समय है रक्त सा लाल और ओज्स्वनॆ होने का

    ये लेखन ....उस भाव को गहरा रहा है की कह सकें सार्थक सृजन

    सादर

    अनुराग

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    1. आभार अनुराग भाई। आपने इतना सम्मान दिया इस रचना को मेरे लिए बहुत है। मेरी कोशिश येही है की कुछ अच्छा लिख पाऊँ और एक रौशनी जगा जाऊँ, बस आपलोगों का साथ और आशीर्वाद बना रहे येही कामना है।

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  2. Atyant hi bhaavpurna rachna & it is an eye-opener..
    These candle marches are of no use..Abhi bhi whenever people see something like this happening somewhere, then they don't have the courage to go & protect the victim..They just think ki faaltu me jhanjat kaun mol le..If they try to visualise that how will they react if the victim would have been their wife, mother or daughter..Will they leave her there & not save her? Logo ko chahiye ki wo naare aur anshan k bajaaye apne andar k Insaan ko jeevit rakhe & its rightly said that " U don't objectify people u love.People need to differentiate between love & lust." This reminds me of a few lines by the gr8 poet Sharad Chandra Tripathi
    "Nirbhaya kaho,Daamini kaho ya Paapin keh badnaam karo
    Par Naari se hi janme ho, us kokh ka kuch toh maan karo
    Ye Candle, Anshan ,Naare kuch bhi kaam na aayenge..
    Bus koi bata de hum kab tak abla kehlayenge.."

    Keep Writing & inspiring us..:)

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    1. Thnq Devika for such lovely comments. Exactly i had same thoughts while writing what u have told here. The quotes mentioned are so profound n thought provoking. I wish this new year could bring some positive change towards society n ppl. Thnxz for the appreciation!

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  3. Hradaysparshi Shabd OR Sach b he jab desh ko azad krwane ki baat tab b sahitya ne apna anupam yogdan diya tha, vastvikta me sahitkaro ne apna yogdan diya tha desh bhakti ki tez auj wo bharat ka brakuti tanana, wo yuvao ka gusail swabhav, In sab me kahi kahi us samay ka inswartha lekan utprerak raha he or aaj k samaz ko iski bahut avyasakta he .... Abko Abhar Abhilekh ji ki apse is Avyasakta ki purti ki shuruwat huyi...
    Mene Devika ji ka comment pada" ek baat kahna chahungi unki lines pr " Q?? Sansar Hamesha Abla ka Arth balhin lagata he,
    Q?? nhi ye use kabhi apaar bal wali kah pata he,
    Q?? hamesha hi uske bal ko purusho se anka jata he,
    koi paar nhi jiske bal ka, jiski koi thah nhi laga pata he,"

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    1. thnq Ritu for such valuable comments..tum sabhi ne itni saraahna ki hai iske liye main tahedil se shukraguzaar hun! Aur tumhari lines mein bahut achhe sawaal hai aur batik satik baat kahi hai tumne..widambna ye hai ki hmari hi country mein Aurat Devi k rup mein puji jaati hai fir beizat bhi ki jati hai...shayaad domumha hona fitrat hai ham insaanon ki..! But i appreciate your presence over here...thnxz!

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